This is very good. All it needs is someone dropping lyrics on it. respect!!
I really like this one here. It had a little twist I wasn't expecting. Some deep emotion on the chorus real talk.
This isn't my style but I can see you put a lot of effort into this. I'll give it a 9 for the effort.
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